Sunday, September 29, 2013

SPECIFICALLY for JCHS on Monday, 9/30/13

From text and essay:

1.       Explain the difference between argumentation and persuasion.
2.       Is Carr’s essay an argumentative or persuasive essay? How can you tell?
3.       What is the purpose of an argumentative essay?
4.       What is the structure of an argumentative essay?
5.       How well does Carr’s essay follow this structure?
6.       Where does the thesis or claim in an argumentative essay come? What is Carr’s thesis?
7.       How can writing an antithesis assure that you’ve written a thesis for an argumentative essay?
8.       Compose your own antithesis for Carr’s essay.
9.       There are two types of evidence for argumentative essays—facts and opinions; however, what criteria must all evidence possess.

10.   What types of evidence (I wrote “criteria” on the board—sorry!) does Carr use? Does his evidence meet the requirements established in the text?

Tuesday, September 24, 2013

From C/C to Argumentative

Today:
Hand in your comparison/contrast essays!

For our next class:
Read in your text: 525-532 - Important Points:

525 - The FIRST sentence is IMPORTANT!!
526 - Explain the difference between argumentation and persuasion
         Explain the purpose of argumentation
         What role does emotion play in argument?
527 - While one should have a "stake" in choosing a position in an argument, one must be able to
         _____________.
         If you cannot be ____________, you should ___________. WHY?

        The thesis of an argumentative paper must __________.
528 - What is the antithesis?
          Explain type of audience one must keep in mind for an argument? WHY?
529 - Types of evidence - explain each
530-531 - Criteria for Evidence - explain each

*****DOCUMENTATION*****
We will save this for the 2nd argumentative paper you write, which will be OUT of class

531 - Refutation/refute - explain

Read the following essays listed on the sidebar:
"Is the Internet Making Us Dumber" by Nicholas Carr
"The Genius of the Tinkerer" by Steven Johnson

It could help you to print each one so you will have a physical reference when we discuss these in class!

REMEMBER: if you can't fathom a word by its context or use in a sentence, look it up.





Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Comparison/Contrast - From Topic Subjects to Essay Organization

Suppose you had the following essay topic (which is simply an exercise in comparison/contrast):
Compare the two sculptures, one by August Rodin and the other by Robert Indiana.

Step One: find the common features:

Both sculptures: 
  • deal with the same theme (LOVE)
  • are meant to be viewed by the public
  • suggest "something" about humanity

Step Two: find the differences within each common feature, keeping the same order as you have established:
  • theme: love
    • Rodin's statue titled "The Kiss" deals with physical love/sensual love; it's very definite, involving two people who are lovers, perhaps husband & wife; the emphasis is personal
    • Indiana's sculpture of "LOVE" suggests a broader, more idealistic view of love, in an abstract form, a generalized ideal of love
  • viewed by the public
    • Rodin's sculpture is most at home in a museum, where art is appreciated and where people seek the beauty/inspiration found in art
    • Robert Indiana's sculpture is easily found in a park and could be re-located to another public arena; it is intended to be viewed by all people, whether they have a background in art or not; in fact, this sculpture is seen by the masses--again reinforcing a love between all people
  • what it suggests to or about people
    • Rodin's sculpture is both romantic and provocative; it appeals to people in the same way as a love poem might and suggests to the viewer the importance of connecting with another person in an intimate embrace and relationship
    • Indiana's sculpture, on the other hand, suggests that love is universal; it stands as a reminder to all people of the importance of community compassion, understanding; it reminds the public that not only do individuals need love, but the world, the nation, the community needs it as well
All of the above are notes that you might (or might not) make before writing a rough draft. NOW--one must decide upon organization, and because it is a C/C essay, it must be tight and logical.

For subject to subject organization, take one sculpture and discuss the relevant points that have been chose; then do the next one:

Rodin                                                                        Indiana
theme                                                                        theme
viewers                                                                     viewers
suggestions                                                                suggestions

PLEASE NOTE:  THIS DOES NOT MEAN THAT THERE SHOULD ONLY BE TWO BODY PARAGRAPHS.

The key is organization!!!  THE ORDER NEEDS TO REMAIN THE SAME IN EACH EXAMPLE.

ALSO: all that has been done here is a straight-forward comparison/contrast, for the sake of comparison/contrast. However, comparison/contrast is MOST effective when it is completed for a specific purpose, especially if it is for argument or evaluation.

Tuesday, September 3, 2013

Toward Essay #2: Comparison/ Contrast - pgs. 371



Comparison/contrast defined  and used

Analogy – a special form of comparison that “explains one thing by comparing it to a second” (371); note example, top of pg. 372

Recognizing C/C assignments – please note that a number of words or phrases could suggest a comparison/contrast  assignment, including the word evaluate (373)

**!!** Establish a Basis for Comparison! **!!**

  • ·         two things must have enough in common to justify the comparison
  • ·         a comparison MUST lead beyond the obvious – note the example between bees and humans, pgs. 373-374

Selecting Points for Discussion in the Essay
Select subjects with commonalities then the points that will be discussed

Treat similar elements for each subject discussed – refer to the example, page 374

You might also compare and contrast two characters often seen in each other’s company and serve as character foils. For example:
HUCK FINN                                                              TOM SAWYER  
Realist – lives adventures                                            Romantic – makes up adventures
Has his own moral code                                               Lives by morality set by society
Cannot be satisfied returning home                             Happy to return to his Aunt Polly

Developing a Thesis for C/C – 375
The thesis statement should identify the subjects to be compared and contrasted AND the points that will be covered.  A thesis statement for a comparison/contrast essay may be much longer than one for a narrative, description or exemplification essay. Here is a thesis for a comparison of Huck Finn and Tom Sawyer: 

Mark Twain’s masterpiece, The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, presents two of the most famous characters in American literature, Huck Finn and Tom Sawyer.  Tom is a mischievous boy who invents adventures, adheres to a morality based on the rules of his hometown, and is, at the close of day, relieved to be back home with Aunt Polly. Huck, the son of an abusive, alcoholic father, runs headlong into real escapades from which he must escape; along the way, Huck develops his own set of values and discovers being “civilized” is not worth the sacrifice of personal freedom. 

Note that the body paragraphs would discuss each point in detail with examples from the novel to illustrate each point.

Structuring a Comparison/Contrast Essay – page 375
For your C/C essay, plan to use subject-by-subject comparison- 375-376
Read carefully the student essay on pages 379-383 for an excellent example of a subject to subject C/C
If time allows, we will discuss the two images on pages 391-392 and the questions that follow
DO read the essays indicated on your syllabus


                                                                                                               

Topics for Essay #1



Develop ONE of the following topics into a well written, well supported exemplification essay. The title should indicate the general subject of the essay. The first paragraph should get the reader's attention and move from that general idea to a specific thesis statement. The body of your paper should develop two or three good examples or a single well-developed example (MINIMUM LENGTH: two pages, MLA format)

1. For better or worse, social networks have become an accepted part of American culture.  By using examples like Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, and LinkedIn, explain  whether social networks have delivered either a positive or negative impact on society.

2. Reality television has become increasingly popular. Select one type of reality television (those that revolve around talent; those that center on jobs and families; or those that center on style or relationships) and give examples to explain why this type of reality television appeals to the American audience. 

3.  Americans’ favorite television programs are interrupted frequently by commercials. Using examples to illustrate, explain why some commercials have become the most memorable—or the most annoying


Monday, September 2, 2013

Rubric for Essay #1

Introduction: 20 pts.
·        16-20 pts.: Clear effort to engage the reader’s attention; adequate information/background; strong thesis statement that focuses main idea of paper to come
·        11-15: Some effort to engage the reader has been made; background information is good; thesis is clear
·        6-10: The introduction is adequate, but not outstanding; the reader may or may not be engaged; background is given and the thesis is clear and direct
·        1-5: The introduction is ineffective and inadequate, with NO discernible thesis statement

MLA Format; Grammar; Spelling; Mechanics; Tense and Person: 25 pts.

·        16-25 pts.: Essay presentation has followed MLA format: header, heading, title, 12 pt. plain font, double spaced; consecutively numbered pages; there are no misspellings or grammatical errors; the essay is consistent in tense, with no more than one or two minor flaws

·        11-15 : Essay presentation is in MLA format, with  no more than two misspellings and/or grammatical errors; it is consistent in tense (for the most part) and there are no errors in agreement or word usage

·        6-10: MLA format has been used, but presentation has three or more spelling errors and/or serious grammatical errors; there are tense shifts or agreement errors either in subject/verb or pronoun/antecedent; vague pronoun reference may be a problem; incorrect or wrong word may have been used; there may be a serious flaw in sentence formation(s) [e.g., fragment; comma splice; run-on].

·        1-5: MLA format has not been followed; work has five or more spelling errors and/or serious grammatical errors; there are tense shifts or agreement errors either in subject/verb or pronoun/antecedent; vague pronoun reference may be a problem; incorrect or wrong word may have been used; there may have been several, repeated sentence flaw(s).

Examples, Content & Knowledge: 30 pts.
·        26-30 pts: Student demonstrates full knowledge of the each example, excellent and abundant  detail, and elaborates fully.  All points and examples are directly, explicitly related to the thesis statement.

·        21-25 - Student is at ease with content, but fails to fully elaborate.  For the most part, details, elaborations, and illustrations of examples are good and related clearly to the thesis statement.

·        11-20 - Student is uncomfortable with content and is able to write only minimal information, with little detail, which is not always directlyclearly related to the thesis statement.  Reader is forced to draw inferences which may or may not be correct or accurate.

·        0-10 – Student does not understand or grasp the essay concept; does not have adequate detail or information for examples used. The few examples that are present are not directly related to the thesis statement.

Organization & Coherence:  25 pts.
·        16-25 pts. - Information is in a logical, interesting order and sequence, providing coherence throughout paper. There are no illogical sentences; there are clear transitions with examples in a logical, coherent order.

·        11-15 - Student presents information in logical sequence with information in a coherent order.

·        6-10 - Reader has difficulty following work because the some irrelevant information has superseded significant information

·        0-5 - Sequence of information is hopelessly and carelessly mixed creating chaos and confusion in writing.



MLA Format

Last Name page #

Your First and Last Name

Mrs. or Ms. Sharon Aiken

English 1101 - 

Date Due or Typed

Title

          Just as all fields or disciplines of study have their respective style or format, so does English.

 It is worth noting that a paper written for a history class may require the Chicago style; a paper 

written for social science or education may require APA format. If a paper is required in a class, it 

is vital that the student inquire which type of format is required, if he/she is not told. Knowing how 

to correctly present an essay in MLA format is expected in ALL English classes at Middle Georgia 

State College, as well as other colleges and universities throughout Georgia and the U.S. Once 

students know which type of format is required, it is his/her responsibility to apply the style or 

arrangement to his/her own paper.

          This is (roughly) what a paper in MLA format looks like. Variation from any of the followng can cost points. Further assistance can be found in your text on page 735 or  http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/
  •        Margins - 1" all round
  •     Font - 12 pt. plain font
  •     Header - 1/2" from top of page on right hand side
  •        Heading - first line of left margin
  •        Title - still in plain 12 pt. font, double-spaced below heading
  •        Spacing - double space the entire paper from header to last page
  •    DO NOT use extra space between paragraphs; 
  •    DO NOT single space body paragraphs
  •    DO indent ALL paragraphs.