Due to a minor emergency on my end, English 1101-32 will not meet this morning, Thursday, August 29, 2013.
I sincerely apologize for any inconvenience this may for you. We will pick up
Tuesday morning, right where we left off. Consequently, you do NOT have an essay to write over
the weekend, so have a safe Labor Day and I will see you Tuesday morning.
Thursday, August 29, 2013
Friday, August 23, 2013
Essays on the Sidebar
Brent Staples' essay, "Just Walk on By" is available online.
Please note that "The Catbird Seat" by Birnbaum is not available online; however, James Thurber's short story of the same title is available. If you are unable to read Birnbaum's essay, READ the STORY by Thurber. It will explain the concept of "the catbird seat" and will fit easily into our discussion of Birnbaum's story.
Please note that "The Catbird Seat" by Birnbaum is not available online; however, James Thurber's short story of the same title is available. If you are unable to read Birnbaum's essay, READ the STORY by Thurber. It will explain the concept of "the catbird seat" and will fit easily into our discussion of Birnbaum's story.
Tuesday, August 20, 2013
Week 1 - Day 2
Week 1 – Day 2: [note: numbers refer to pages in the text; if a
word, phrase, section is bold faced,there is a chance it will appear on the
Quiz over composition]
In the best of all possible
worlds, we will use the online resources provided by Bedford/St. Martin. These
are listed on the sidebar of the blog. If we do not have time in class, please
explore them and the website on your own; it could be of great benefit to you.
Most of the videos are five minutes or less.
11- The Writing Process –
familiar to almost everyone; key word: RECURSIVE
– “a procedure that can repeat itself indefinitely”
13 – Reading to Write: Becoming a
Critical Reader [same thing as an active, smart or mindful reader]
Don’t
assume the conversation is one way; it should be YOU need to think about
what the writer says and decide for yourself whether you agree or disagree;
determine what questions you have; do NOT be afraid to question, to think. Do
NOT close your mind.
If you think when you read, if
you’re more aware; if you’re involved in
the text that you READ; you will be more
involved with the text that you write.
15 – Note All the various
clues your book suggests could make you
more alert—visual and verbal signals
23 – annotate!!!! – make notes . . . in the text, in a notebook,
on a computer . . . one author suggests a “T” Journal:
Quote, summary,
paraphrase, page # YOUR response/reaction to the
item in text
Discussion: “READING” refers to visual texts as well;
note the tatoo on page 27, and those on 226
YOU MUST USE INFERENCE and critical thinking to get the most out of either
reading assignment.
29 – Invention
29 – understand the assignment
30 – length – a minimum of two
typed, double-spaced pages
30- purpose
31 – audience & occasion
32 – knowledge – both yours AND
your audience
34 – unless otherwise specified,
all papers should move from GENERAL to SPECIFIC, especially the one on example
34 – 35 – if you have trouble
developing your ideas, consider the “Questions for Probing” on these pages
Both the book and video suggest
various ways of getting started on an essay: brain storming, free writing, clustering,
outlining. USE WHAT WORKS FOR YOU. Remember, though, that the initial start is
not necessarily the final draft.
43 – follow the diagram on page
43 to structure your papers
44 – 47 – thesis statement should
come in the first paragraph, but it SHOULD NOT be the first sentence. A good thesis statement should clearly identify the main idea of the paper, indicate the
essay’s purpose, and be very explicit and direct. After reading the first
paragraph, the reader should know exactly what the essay will discuss. A title is NOT the same as a thesis.
Unless otherwise indicated, all thesis statements in 1101 should be
EXPLICIT.
51 – Arrangement – 53-54:
Strategies for beginning an essay
An introduction should get the reader’s attention, provide any
necessary background information, lead into the thesis statement.
55- What NOT to Do in an Introduction !!!!!
56 – Body Paragraphs should be unified, coherent, and well
developed. All should be directly
related to the thesis statement and yes, Virginia, they should have a topic sentence that is deliberate and
clear. BTW: three sentences does not make for a well-developed paragraph
unless you’re in middle school.
58 – types of support that may be
used to develop your paragraphs are listed
60-61 – strategies for your
conclusion are suggested
*
211 – “Exemplification uses one or more particular cases, or examples, to
illustrate or explain a general point or an abstract concept”
Why begin with exemplification? –
see pages 212-213
213 – “The thesis statement of an
exemplification essay . . . .”
214-215: Provide Enough Examples;
use a “fair range” of examples; USE EFFECTIVE TRANSITIONS
215-216 – How to structure an
exemplification essay
READING ASSIGNMENT:
Thursday, August 15, 2013
Syllabus
Middle
Georgia State College - Department of English - Fall 2013
English 1101
Instructor: Sharon Aiken – H/SS 248 - Office phone: 478-471-2893
Office hours: M/W: WRC: 2-3 p.m.; T/TH: H/SS 248: 2-5
p.m.
Email: sharon.aiken@maconstate.edu - Use
your Macon State email. I
check and respond to my Macon State email, Monday-Thursday and
on Sunday evenings. I expect you to do likewise, because I use email for
class announcements or changes in the class schedule.
Website:
Required Prerequisites: Students required to take English and/or Reading Learning Support classes are not eligible for English 1101 until they have successfully completed such courses with a grade of
A,
B, or C. Students whose SAT, ACT, or COMPASS scores have exempted them from taking English
and/or Reading Learning Support classes are eligible to take ENGL 1101.
MGSC and MGSC English Dept. Policy Statements:
30-Hour Rule: In accordance with Board of Regents policy, students must complete ENGL 1101 and
ENGL 1102 before earning thirty hours of course credit.
Exit Requirements:
All students must complete ENGL 1101 with a grade of A, B, or C to proceed to
ENGL 1102 and to receive Area A1 credit.
Regents Exemption: Students who complete both ENGL 1101 and ENGL 1102 with grades of A, B,
or
C have fulfilled the University System of Georgia Regents Reading and Writing Requirements.
Supplemental Instruction:
ENGL 0099A Basic Writing and Grammar and ENGL 099B Essays and
Advanced Grammar are Learning Support classes that students may elect to take along with ENGL
1101 or in preparation for ENGL 1101.
MGSC Academic Misconduct Statement: As a Middle
Georgia State College student and
as a student in this class, you are responsible
for
reading, understanding, and
abiding by the MGSC Student
Code of Conduct. The Student Code of Conduct is included in the MGSC Student
Handbook and is available
online at http://www.mga.edu/student- affairs/docs/MGSC_Student_Handbook.pdf.
Policy
on
Disability Accommodations: “Students seeking academic accommodations for a
special need must contact Middle Georgia
State College
Office of Disability
Services
in Macon at
(478) 471-2985 or in Cochran
at (478) 934-3023. Students may
also visit the Disability Services Office
in room 266 of
the Student Life Center on the
Macon campus or in
Sanford Hall on
the Cochran campus.”
Attendance Policy: This class follows the
guidelines established by MGSC as follows:
“Students whose number of
absences is more than
twice the number of class meetings per week
[4] may be assigned a
failing grade
for
the course at the discretion of
the instructor. Students who have more absences than the number of
class meetings per week
but less than
twice
the number of class meetings per
week
may be penalized at the discretion of the
instructor.
Students who have absences which are
less than
or equal to the number of
class meetings per week
will not be penalized.”
In addition, if you know you will be
absent when a paper is due, submit your paper in advance. If you are ill and
unable to come to class when a paper is due, be prepared to submit a doctor’s
excuse, as well as your paper, upon return to class. (If a member of your immediate family has a health condition requiring
your absence from class, remember: that is still an absence. [English 1101 and 1102 have been known to
cause sprains, eczema, dandruff, sudden seizures of unknown origins,
hospitalizations, broken bones, accidents, and the plague. Students and their
families are most susceptible one to two days before a paper deadline.] Do your
work, plan ahead and protect yourself and your loved ones.)
Withdrawal Policy: “ Students
may withdraw from the course and earn a grade of “W” up to and including the
midterm date, which occurs on October 16,2013. After midterm,
students who withdraw will receive a grade of “WF.” The MGSC Withdrawal Form, which is
available online or in the Office of the Registrar, must
be signed by the instructor in advance of withdrawal.”
Purpose of the Class: ENGL 1101 is a composition course focusing on techniques required for effective writing. It
emphasizes exposition, analysis, argumentation, and research skills. Instruction should focus on teaching students to think critically and write clear, precise, and effective papers that inform the
reader about the writer’s personal experiences, explain an idea, argue a position, and respond to an
essay question prompt. This course teaches students how to introduce a topic, articulate a thesis statement, craft topic sentences, and develop claims in coherent paragraphs.
Student Learning Objectives:
· analyze, or interpret evidence or arguments, in order to formulate and support new arguments
or
solve problems (MGSC General Education Learning Goal III, Critical Thinking)
· demonstrate a collegiate competency to read critically and communicate ideas in well-
developed written forms (MGSC General Education Learning Goal A1 [Communications])
· understand rhetorical
contexts
for their writing by establishing the writer’s role,
the audience, and the purpose of the
project
· use recursive processes that include collecting information, focusing, ordering,
drafting, revising, and
editing
· demonstrate the techniques and skills of research, integration of source material, and documentation
· read and respond to various texts for purposes of interpretation, analysis, synthesis, evaluation,
and judgment
· use conventions of writing mechanics, usage, and style to communicate effectively for the given audience, purpose, and format (guidelines recommended by the Board of Regents
Advisory Committee on English).
Required Texts: Patterns for
College Writing; The Things They Carried by Tim O’Brien; Pocket Style Manual with MLA Update
Required Material:
- jump drive - All in-class work is on computer; out of class papers will
need to be composed and saved in either Ms Word or .rtf format. All work
needs to be saved electronically.
- pocket folder for research paper
- half-inch binder in which all work may be
kept and submitted at the end of the semester
Course/ Essay Requirements:
There will be five (5) essays for
the semester; in addition, an in-class final exam
essay is mandatory. [That’s
six essays total that will be written this semester.] At least one of the five essays must be written in class extemporaneously (without specific prior preparation); this in-class essay will require students to “analyze, or interpret evidence or arguments, in order to formulate and support new arguments or solve problems” (Learning Goal III, Gen Ed Outcomes). Also, at least one of the five essays will require students to incorporate library
research into their writing following the MLA style.
The five
(5)
required essays will comprise
at least 60% of the
course grade for ENGL 1101. The in-class
final exam
essay (see below) will count for an
additional 20% of the
class grade.
A student will not pass
ENGL
1101 without earning an average grade
of C
or better on his or her graded writing.
Essays 1, 2, 3, 5 = 40%
Essay 4, using documentation = 20%;
Class participation, daily writing, quizzes = 20%
Final Essay = 20%
Plagiarism Policy: If you cheat on a test, you will get a zero. If you plagiarize an assignment,
that grade will result in a zero. Failing
this course is the common penalty for plagiarism; it is difficult to achieve a
passing grade, if one receives a zero on a plagiarized assignment worth 10% or
20%. Plagiarism occurs when a
writer uses the ideas, wording, organization, etc., of another writer without
proper citation, whether intentional or unintentional. This
includes having someone “help” you write the paper, buying the paper online, or
lifting ideas, sentences, and/or paragraphs from another text. Keep an electronic copy of all assignments
and be prepared to send it to me immediately if asked. Please go to the MSC
Library site for further information on avoiding plagiarism. Note:
A plagiarism prevention service is used in the evaluation of written
work submitted for this course. As directed by the instructor, students are
expected to submit their assignments, or have their assignments submitted,
through the service in order to meet the requirements for this course. The
papers may be retained by the service for the sole purpose of checking for
plagiarized content in future student submissions.
Definition of Plagiarism:
The following definition of plagiarism expands upon the Student Code’s
description
of plagiarism and has
been adopted
as standard by the English
Department. For further explanation
and illustrations, refer to the
English Department’s “A Definition
of Plagiarism,” available online at http://www.mga.edu/liberal-arts/english.
1. It is
plagiarism to
copy
another’s words directly and present them as your own without quotation marks and direct indication
of whose words you are copying. All
significant phrases,
clauses, and passages copied
from another source require quotation marks and
proper acknowledgment, down to the page number(s) of printed
texts.
2. It is
plagiarism to
paraphrase another
writer’s work
by
altering some words
but communicating the
same essential
point(s) made by the
original author without
proper acknowledgment. Though
quotation marks are not needed
with paraphrasing, you
must still acknowledge the
original source directly.
3. Plagiarism includes
presenting someone else’s ideas
or factual
discoveries as your
own. If you follow another
person’s general outline or
approach
to a topic, presenting another’s
original
thinking or specific conclusions as
your own, you must cite the source even if your work
is in your own
words
entirely. When you present
another’s statistics,
definitions, or statements
of fact in your
own
work, you must also cite the source.
4. Plagiarism includes
allowing someone else
to prepare work
that you present as your own.
5. Plagiarism applies
in other media besides traditional
written
texts,
including,
but not limited
to, oral presentations, graphs, charts, diagrams, artwork,
video and audio compositions,
and other electronic media such
as web pages,
PowerPoint presentations, and
online discussion postings.
Midterm Deadlines and Portfolios:
- Students should have at least
two graded essays returned to
them before the semester’s withdrawal deadline.
- At the
end of
the semester, all
essays are to be filed for one
full semester. After one semester, instructors may allow students to pick up their
papers.
Final Examination:
The final examination in English 1101 is a two-hour essay written in response to class reading.
Students may take notes on the
reading using a 3” by 5” note card. This card may not contain any full sentences, with the exception of documented quotes from the readings. In class, the students will be given a choice of at least two topics
based on the reading. The student will write on one of these options:
he or she will not have access to
the
readings or to grammar handbooks,
but the student may use his or her note cards, a dictionary, and a
thesaurus. The final exam essay should reflect knowledge of the readings, but mere summary of the readings will not be acceptable. Any additional instructions for the final exam will be provided by the
instructor. The final exam must count for 20 % of the student’s final grade.
Grading Scale:
Grade
|
Grade and
Description
|
A
|
90-100
/ Excellent Work
|
B
|
80-89/Good Work
|
C
|
70-79/Satisfac tory Work
|
D
|
60-69/Unsatisfactory
|
F
|
<
60
|
Class Policies:
1. Please be on time; if you drive a distance to get here, plan accordingly. Four tardies
of 15 min. or more = an absence
2. Assignments are to be handed in on time,
typed. Writing on class computers is part of the
class; there will be both in-class and out-of-class essays. Title
all assignments and use MLA format.
3.
If a hard copy of the
paper is not handed in on time, in class, the date that it is due, you may
email a copy of the paper, WITH PENALTIES :
a) you will automatically forfeit a letter
grade off the paper
b) that essay may not be graded until the
end of the semester, which is when I grade all late work
c) if it is the first or second essay, you
will not have an opportunity to revise the essay for a higher grade.
4. The student has the option of revising the
first and second essays with the following stipulations:
a.
The student makes time
to conference with me on the mistakes noted in the paper
b.
The original essay and
rubric must be handed in with the revised essay
c. If the only edits made to the paper are for
grammar/mechanics/corrections , the grade will remain the same (the student has
only copied and corrected)
d.
Substantive revisions could gain the student as much as
one letter grade
5. I will NOT accept a research
paper late or via email.
6. If you plan to print out of class essays in class, please attend to
them it in the first 10 min. of class. Do NOT plan to revise, or retype your
paper when you come to class—this should be done on your own.
7. IF YOU USE ANY WORD PROCESSING PROGRAM OTHER THAN MS WORD, SAVE YOUR
PAPER AS AN .rtf (Rich Text Format) file. Your paper cannot be
opened, cannot be read, cannot be printed otherwise. Not even the tech guys and
gurus in the library can help.
8. If you miss a daily
assignment, you may NOT make
it up; if you FAIL TO TURN IN a major essay, your grade will result in a ZERO. You MUST complete all essays to pass the class.
9. I expect students to demonstrate a professional demeanor in
their attitude, manner and language, both written and spoken. Turn your phones on “manner mode” if you must
keep them on. Do not text, update your
facebook status, shop on your tablet, or surf the web when I am teaching, when
we are engaged in peer review or class discussion, or when students give a
presentation. If you want to enjoy those activities, I will ask you to
leave the class. This class asks only
two hours and a thirty minutes of your undivided attention each week. If
that is too difficult, you should reconsider whether you are serious about this
class.
10. There should be no open food or drink in the computer lab.
11. Please do not distract others who are working or paying attention in
this class. I respect your right to fail
this class, but not your right to infringe upon others who may want to
pass. No one needs to be distracted.
12. While you may have graduated from a high school that upheld the motto:
“Failure is not an option,” please be advised that failure is an option in college. Unless you were held to high
standards previously and take your education seriously, you may find that your
grades are lower than they were in high school.
13. Active
Participation is expected from every student in class and is
worth ten percent of your final grade. It begins but does not end with
attendance and includes the following:
Criteria
|
25 pts.
|
20 pts.
|
15 pts.
|
0-10 pts. & below
|
Attendance
|
Attends class regularly – with no more than 1
absence at mid-term; usually prompt & professional
|
Attends class regularly; no more than 1 absence
at mid-term; professional & seldom tardy
|
Attends class regularly; may have more than 2
absences at this point; professional
|
Has missed more than 2 days and often presented
as unprofessional
|
Level of Active Engagement
|
Proactive in class; contributes with ideas,
questions, observations; answers questions; treats classmates & professor
with courtesy
|
Contributes to class; frequently offers
comments, answers & asks questions; treats classmates & professor
with courtesy
|
Offers some observations and answers questions
now and then or when called on; treats classmates & professor with
courtesy
|
Rarely contributes to class by offering ideas
or asking questions. primarily a
non-participant. Does not add to class discussion, but sits silently.
|
Listening Skills
|
Listens when others talk; builds on others’
ideas; involves others in class by asking questions or seeking others’
responses
|
Listens then others talk; frequently builds on
ideas of others.
|
Listens when
others talk, but does not respond to ideas
|
Often does not listen when others talk; often
distracted by his/her own agenda—e.g., the internet, studying for another
class, talking to peers, when inappropriate
|
Preparation
|
Almost always prepared for class, with
assignments and required class materials
|
Usually prepared for class
|
Frequently prepared for class
|
Seldom prepared
|
The Writing Center is NOW OPEN; additional information will be
forthcoming, but it is in your best interest to use the writing center to
improve your writing
IMPORTANT
DATES:
·
August 22: Last Day to
Make Class Schedule Changes
·
September 2: Labor Day Holiday
·
October 16: Last Day to
Withdraw from a Regular Session Class with a "W"
·
November 25-29: Thanksgiving
Holidays
·
December 9: Regular
Session Classes End
·
December 10-13: Final Exams for Regular Session Classes (refer to the Academic Calendar for the Exam Schedule)
Grading and Assignments:
Assignment
|
Percent
of Grade
|
Tentative Due Date
|
Essay # 1 –
Exemplification
|
10
|
09/03/13
|
Essay #2 –
In-class essay:
Comparison/Contrast of two reading selections
|
10
|
09/19/13
|
Essay #3 – Argumentation
|
10
|
10/03/13
|
Essay #4 –
Researched Argumentation
|
20
|
10/24/13
|
Quiz 1 – this quiz will cover all aspects of
composition, MLA format, and argumentation to this point
|
10
|
10/29/13
|
Essay #5 – In-class essay:
Extended Definition
|
10
|
11/07/13
|
Quiz 2 – over the novel, The Things They Carried
|
5
|
11/18/13
|
Class Participation – please keep
in mind that class participation begins but does not end with attendance
|
5
|
12/10/13
|
FINAL ESSAY – Literary Analysis over
|
20
|
TBA – after corrections are made in the exam
schedule
|
The best way to develop your writing is to read, read, read. There are
no shortcuts, no easy outs, and no simple solutions. Read everything, good and
bad, exciting and mediocre, suspenseful and boring. You will gradually begin to
develop a sense of identifying good writing that is coherent and clear,
complete, as well as concise. Bad writing will show you what to avoid; good
writing will show you what to emulate. This class does not meet every day, but
if you truly want to succeed and develop, not only in this class, but in
college and in life, it is in your best interest to read every day and, if at
all possible, to write every day. Seek help when you need it. Find your voice
and remain true to it; take pride in your work. Do your best, whether your best
is a “C” or an “A.”
“Writing is easy; all you have to do is sit staring at a blank sheet
of paper until the drops of blood form on your
forehead.” Gene Fowler
Tentative Schedule by the Week—reading selections should be completed
by the date announced in class and noted on syllabus; unless noted, all reading
selections refer to Patterns for College
Writing
08/19: Assign
complete syllabus to be read; focus in class on most relevant items; discussion
of professional attitude, levels of language, critical and active reading and
its connection to writing—pgs. 13-27 in text.
Second day of class—discussion of pgs. 29-75 and Chapter 8:
Exemplification, 211-216
08/26: Reading selections:
David J. Birnbaum, 228, “The Catbird
Seat,” Questions : Purpose and Audience [P.A.],
all; Style and Structure [S&S]:
all; Vocabulary exercises [V.E.]: 2
& 3. Brent Staples, 240, “Just Walk on By: A Black Man Ponders His Power to
Alter Public Space,” Questions: Comprehension [C], 1 & 2; P.A.,
all; S&S, 2 & 3; V.E., 2; assign topics for the first
essay
09/02: LABOR DAY HOLIDAY
09/03: Day one: Essay
#1 DUE; introduction to
Chapter 11: Comparison/Contrast,
371-379; Bruce Catton, “Grant and Lee: A Study in Contrasts,” 393; Amy
Chua, “Why Chinese Mothers Are Superior,” 410; Questions on Chua: C: all; P
& :, 1, 2,3; S & S: 1, 2, 3, 5; V.E: 2; online essays will also be
assigned
09/09: Complete
discussion of Chua; discussion of Nicholas Carr and Steven Johnson on the
internet
09/16: Discussion/lecture: how to compare and contrast two different reading
selections; day two: in-class essay #2
09/23: Chapter 14: Argumentation, 525-542 & Thomas
Jefferson, “The Declaration of Independence,” 553-556; questions: C: all; P
& A: all; S & S: 3, 4; V.E.: 2 &3; day two, focus on logical
fallacies, 537-540
09/30: Reading selections: “Should American Citizenship Be a Birthright?” and
the two accompanying essays, 593-603; questions, 597: C: all; P & A: 1&
2; S & S: all; V.E.: 2; questions, 600: C: all; P & A, 1, 2, 5; S &
S: 2 & 3; V.E.: 2; assign essay; essay # 3 due
on day two.
10/07: Lecture/discussion: documentation. How to accurately and correctly begin
research and incorporate material into
an essay in MLA format. Works Cited Page. Internal citations. Discussion and choice of Organ Donation
Policy or Government Tax on Sugary Drinks
10/14: In-class work on research essay
10/21: Day one:
in-class work on research essay; day two: research essay #4 due.
10/28: Day one: quiz #1; day two, Chapter 13: Definition, 489-500 and reading selections,
“Tortilla,” 507 and “Wife-Beater,” 516. Questions, TBA.
11/04: Begin essay #5, the extended definition essay, in
class; day two, essay #5 due
11/11: Lecture/discussion on The Things They Carried, with Tim O’Brien youtube video; day two,
discussion of the first two stories, “The Things They Carried” and “Love”
11/18: day one: quiz #2 over the novel; day two: character assignments, as part of class participation
11/25: THANKSGIVING HOLIDAYS
12/02: Student led discussion of plot and characters in
the novel
12/09: Teacher led discussion of additional major themes
in the novel
12/ TBA : FINAL EXAM
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